Friday 12 March 2010: Balance
not enough yin
too much yang
turning too much to the dark side
things need squared off
and corners rounded
measured
leveled
sorted
on the other hand
chaos reigns
and the rope twists
life's a roller coaster
and the tides continue to turn.
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Comments
The only thing that doesn't change is that things change.
~ CanCarrier
I like the shape of this poem, both content-wise and line by line.
~ Skip

Nice lines!
~ MY
Lovely picture
~ eve
Thanks.
Skip - I didn't notice until you mentioned the shape of the words, that it echos the pic. Thanks for pointing it out.
~ Northern

I don't know who I am. Will find out and get back to you, whoever you are. x
this blip is so how it is right now. COOL
~ hope

Ouch, my brain hurts (which it often does)
~ Scobes

Drink in one hand, chocolate in the other. Balance, Friday night style.
~ SooB

That is neat
~ kaybee
Yup, all true. Lovely image. (belated thanks for your congrats on 365!)
~ besideherself
Oh. Just noticed the poem undulates like the image -- they don't call me attentiveness for nothing!
~ besideherself
Excellent illustration of your words. Great abstract image.
~ Echo

lovely cool image ,
~ sunflower

You're far too cosmic for me.
~ G
