So far....

totally confused!   some of this image works well, a lot of it doesn't....i'm not fishing for complements i can assure you fellow blippers...i'm just trying to identify for myself what the issues are.   left side is too cluttered, water isn't defined enough, foreground is kinda messy!   the rocks are doing ok, the centre of attraction (the focal point) is ok....anyway, i'm stopping here cos it's lunch time, and what i might do is attempt another go at this composition.   but it has been good to spend the last 2 hours working on it.

had an awesome swim this morning!  counting my laps.....50 twice this week.   it is a small pool so it's not as impressive as it sounds !