Lucifer in a glass (with greenfly)

I'm still attempting to come up with something that I can enter into a club competition with the theme of `Glass'. Here's todays offering. The lighting (and key) is very different to Thursdays attempt and I do like it - BUT the flower has lost a petal so is not quite as well balanced and also I do like the sharpness of the petals in Thursdays image.

I've tried to incorporate some of your suggestions into today's image but it has proved quite a challenge.

I'm going to add the different versions to my Flickr page >>>

If you have the time I'd welcome any comments. Thank you

p.s I have done one or two other jobs today like clearing out papers I'll no longer need once retired ... and it has rained, but not nearly enough!

p.p.s. I found greenfly today, they were there on Thursday but I've only just spotted them!